After a week long break I’m feeling a little better. My new medication was making me dizzy, worn out and nauseous, but I seem to be finally adjusting to it. So now its finally time to get into the last but of this season!
I’m a bit lost, in the previous comic Marah agreed to go back to the ship and go home, didn’t she? Did something happen between that comic and this one?
In this strip she’s leaving.
The 1st and last panel shows that she’s going on further into the tower on her own (in order to find her way into the Arsenal of winter, and hopefully home). The 2nd and 3rd panel take place right before this, as she says goodbye to the Pirates and has a final exchange with the Hand.
So, is our Marah the one who fought the Prince? Are we going to have more Marahs turn up? Cool stuff.
Yes yes! An army of Marahs! An unstoppable horde, with a middle-schooler’s sense of right and wrong!
That is where you your path will lead? is the you in this part supposed to be at the end?
I changed the wording at the last minute and I guess I forgot to delete the ‘you’.
To me as a german it didn’t even read wrong, the “you” is the object that is being lead by the path. I guess in english the “you” would have to be at the end of the sentence, german grammar is a bit more flexible in ordering parts of a sentence. 🙂
I’m relieved that German readers don’t now how dumb I am.
I had assumed you went for a linguistic inversion… y’know, Yoda speak?
That ALMOST works.
Roll with it! I also didn’t see anything wrong with the writing till ya said something. Guess it just auto corrected in the brain hole lol
there is only a day until the next comic is scheduled and I could not be more excited
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